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A girl sits with her tattered clothes
A soul shattered with no being fixed
A fear spreads from her eyes
A silent prayer leaves her mind

Her parents yell at her all day long
A sicking thump splits the floor
Shaking uncontrollably she stays still
Her father pulls a blade

A young girl is stabbed
blood runs along the floor
sirens come to late
an angel is added to the heaves gate

a grave is dug
A coffin is laid
a girl is swallowed up by dirt
an angel sits on God's knee

A pure little soul forgives her dad
A daughter-less father is taken away
friends and family leave her grave
slowly the sun comes out again
this is my piece of art for my contest.
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wolfs-passion Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010
omg i am just about to cry :crying: whenever i read or watch stuff like that it makes me wanna cry cuz it just touches ur heart
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Hikaris-light Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010
yeah
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:iconwolfs-passion:
wolfs-passion Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010
oh and i thought of my story now!
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Hikaris-light Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010
k
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ElfieTanuki Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010  Student General Artist
Aw, how sad. :( But very nicely written. ^^ Good luck on the contest! :D
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Hikaris-light Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010
thanks
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ElfieTanuki Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010  Student General Artist
Np! ^^
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Hikaris-light Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2010
^^
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